Monday, February 6, 2012

After a lifetime dealing with Floridas environmental problems, this is what I came up with. Opinions needed?

the pinnacle of my miami



my heart is broken but not dead

the visibility of the artist upon the fixture



monsters shadow the surrounding environment

while tickling the clouds



congruity collapses



the fake flamingoes no longer stand

in our neighbor's yard

for they are burried under the weight of the monstersAfter a lifetime dealing with Floridas environmental problems, this is what I came up with. Opinions needed?Interesting poem. Graceful images. Well done!

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